Talk:Siv Holme

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Hi! You did a great job on your article, I just have a few suggestions. In the personal life section, there is a space between stud and -ied which needs to be fixed. Don't say "In 1937 Holme engaged and married her first husband," instead say "In 1937, Holme was engaged to and married her first husband." Or just exclude the engagement bit. Don't say "where they would have two children," say "where they had two children." I would also switch the order of the personal life and career in Europe sections. Lhigginbotham (talk) 17:39, 1 December 2020 (UTC)

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