Talk:Siward Barn/GA1

GA Review
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I will be happy to review this article for GA. H1nkles (talk) 00:49, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

GA Review Philosophy
When I do an article review I like to provide a Heading-by-Heading breakdown of suggestions for how to make the article better. It is done in good faith as a means to improve the article. It does not necessarily mean that the article is not GA quality, or that the issues listed are keeping it from GA approval. I also undertake minor grammatical and prose edits. After I finish this part of the review I will look at the over arching quality of the article in light of the GA criteria and make my determination as to the overall quality of the article.

From Origins thru York to Ely
I've reviewed through the York to Ely section and the article looks fine. A bit of overlinking but nothing too concerning. The prose is good, and citing is comprehensive. I'll continue the review later. H1nkles (talk) 01:00, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Remaining sections
Everything is fine, there isn't much available on the subject after he is imprisoned other than his release. You do a good job of relaying the various possibilities while also indicating that these are speculative and uncomfirmed. Photos are fine, I still have to review the references but if they check out then the article will likely pass. H1nkles (talk) 02:07, 10 May 2009 (UTC)