Talk:Six Feet Under (Billie Eilish song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

DarklyShadows I'm happy to see that you've unblocked yourself. I'll start my review soon. LOVI 33  14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Cover art needs alt text.
 * "Finneas O'Connell wrote and solely" → "Finneas O'Connell, Eilish's brother, solely wrote and"
 * Maybe add something about it's lyrical content after the pop ballad mention.
 * "it was certified platinum in Canada by Music Canada (MC)" → "Commercially, it was certified platinum by Music Canada (MC)"

Background and composition

 * "on Soundcloud" → "through Eilish's SoundCloud"
 * "Eilish's second ever single." → "her second single."
 * "According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com" → "According sheet music published by Hal Leonard Music Publishing on Musicnotes.com" with target
 * Target A3 to A (musical note)
 * Target D5 to D (musical note)
 * "The song has been" → "The song is"
 * "and delicate as" → "and delicate like"
 * "Lyrics include: "Help, I lost myself again/But I remember you/Don’t come back; it won’t end well/But I wish you’d tell me too."[7]" this sentence seems redundant as you are not analyzing the lyrics. Remove it.

Reception

 * "When it was released" → "Upon it's release"
 * ""Six Feet Under" has been awarded" → "The song has been awarded"
 * Remove Music Canada from the last sentence, already mentioned in previous sentence

Promotion

 * "The music video was directed by Eilish. The video shows" → "It was directed by Eilish and shows"
 * [14][2] refs need to be in numerical order
 * ""Six Feet Under" was used in" → "The song was used in"

Track Listing

 * Change title to "Track listing"
 * "Remix EP" → "Digital EP – Remixes" with target
 * Add total length for Remix EP

Personnel

 * Target Tidal to Tidal (service)

Certifications

 * MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Six Feet Under"

Final comments and verdict

 * until issues are fixed. It was great reviewing one of your articles again. I hope to do another soon! LOVI  33  19:41, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33 All the problems should be addressed! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 21:51, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Great, I'll pass it now! LOVI  33  22:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)