Talk:Skies of Arcadia/to do

Final Fantasy X, Final Fantasy VIII and Shadow of the Colossus are all very good articles. Try and make this article look like them.


 * The story section is unevenly detailed. There's three paragraphs on the first 1/2 hour of the game, then another three paragraphs summing up the other 40+ hours.
 * Wikipedia is not a game guide/instruction manual. Listing every action the player can take during a battle (run, inventory, guard, etc) is not necessary. Try and avoid getting into really specific aspects of the battle system. Articles are aimed at the general reader looking for info on the game, make sure everything is understandable by someone who has never played the game (or even any videogames).
 * The characters section is way too long. Cut the whole thing down to three/four paragraphs.
 * This is an encyclopedia, not a back-cover blurb. Try to tone down the language a bit (i.e. A swashbuckling tale of pirates, discovery and adventure makes things sound way too dramatic).
 * See WP:FUC. Simply put, the number of copyrighted (fair use) images used should be kept to a minimum. There's in excess of 20 at the moment. This should be cut down to about 5. Those character images can be the first to go.
 * Cite sources.
 * A small section on the game's development should be written. See the above articles for ideas.