Talk:Skin (Rihanna song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 01:34, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

Hey there again :-)


 * Comments from AJona1992
 * According to this report there is one DABLINK. Please fix
 * "The song was included on the set list of the Loud Tour (2011, where" - something is missing ;-)
 * The lead is well written, however, too many sentences start with "The song", needs variety.
 * "while the song is instrumentally complete" - sounds POV-ish
 * "the majority praised the its musical structure as well as Rihanna's vocal performance" - something is missing ;-)
 * "The song was also used in Rihanna's advertisement campaign for Armani Jeans and Emporio Armani Underwear - lets start this off with "Skin".
 * FN#16 publisher?
 * I don't know the publisher. I went on their website and I couldn't find one. Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn
 * FN#25 publisher?
 * FN#28 its title "Britney Spears, Rihanna Kick Off Billboard Music Awards" --> "Britney Spears, Rihanna Kick Off Billboard Music Awards"
 * FN#31 be consistent in weather or not you provide publishers for newspapers, compare with FN#22 and FN#23.
 * Overall the article is well written, just these minor tweaks should be fixed before passing. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  01:34, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Done all. One reply. Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn 14:49, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Alright, I'll now do a spotcheck and make sure all sources verify claims. BRB, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever
 * Everything checks out, offline sources are in good faith will pass. Congrats, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  15:22, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn 15:24, 20 December 2011 (UTC)