Talk:Skinner's Sense of Snow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  R uby2010   comment!  20:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * "Only some students, including Bart and Lisa's classes show up while Skinner and Willie are the only faculty members to show up." Change it up a little
 * You might use Skinner's phrase for the no-shows: "Those Johnny-come-not-lies". WHPratt (talk) 15:49, 4 November 2011 (UTC)


 * How does Skinner's movie get "wrecked"?
 * "...threatening to put them on pegs if they rebel" What do you mean by pegs? Sounds amusing, whatever it is
 * Are Homer and Flanders trying to rescue just Bart and Lisa, or the other children as well? I know that Flanders has a couple kids. Maybe change Bart and Lisa to "Meanwhile, Homer, with the help of Ned Flanders, sets out to rescue the children"
 * Sentences with quotes need citations
 * "The staff of The Journal, while reviewing The Simpsons - Christmas 2 DVD set, described the episode as "memorable",[10] and John McMurtrie of the San Francisco Chronicle described it as "great".[11] " Change it up
 * Ref 7: page number?
 * The source is a news agency, not a newspaper, so there is no page number. Theleftorium (talk) 21:18, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

On hold for seven days while above comments get addressed. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  20:51, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * All done! User:Queenieacoustic hasn't made any edits since August 4 (I hope he hasn't retired...), so I took care of it. Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 21:18, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Happy to pass this one for GA. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  01:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)