Talk:Skye and Lochalsh attacks

Lead
I think that this lead: "The Isle of Skye shootings was a spree shooting which occurred on 10 August 2022 around the Isle of Skye, and on the Scottish mainland. In total, the shootings resulted in one person being killed and three injured." is more suitable for the article as it summarises the information well. I think that the other lead is less suitable because its readability isn’t the best and it doesn’t say in any of the sources that there were two shootings on the mainland. Per the sources, there was at least one shooting on the mainland and at least one on Skye, possibly two. Of course, correct me if I’m wrong. greyzxq talk 13:34, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * @Greyzxq, the numbers are given in the article detail. It says that at a property in Skye a 32-year-old woman was reported as critically injured and that in Teangue (also on Skye) a 47-year-old man had died at the scene - so, two people in Skye. It also says they were later called to an incident in Dornie on the Scottish mainland and that a man and woman were seriously injured - two people on the mainland. -- DeFacto (talk). 13:53, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Yes, but there was only one shooting on the mainland - the one in Dornie. Furthermore, it hasn't been confirmed whether all incidents were shootings. And again, the readability of the other lead is better than the current one and summaries the information better. greyzxq  talk 14:00, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Of course feel free to fix it, but don't just revert, and for the lead only summarise what is already somewhere in the main body of the article, for which we probably don't need sources added (per MOS:LEADCITE) and an edit summary with each edit would be useful per WP:FIES. -- DeFacto (talk). 14:13, 11 August 2022 (UTC)