Talk:Skyline Restaurant/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing this. Always a pleasure to review your articles. Will have notes out tomorrow, assuming my computer doesn't break again. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 12:55, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * All the images provided by the nominator, rights are in order.
 * You have three exterior shots of the restaurant. This is a little much, and doesn't really add much to the article or anyone's understanding. Remove either 'File:Skyline Restaurant, 2021 11.jpg' or 'File:Skyline Restaurant, 2021 05.jpg'.
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:31, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Minor MOS:SANDWICH issue.
 * Still an issue with the image removed? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Love to see ALT text
 * 👍 --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy-vios

 * Earwig only flags quotes
 * 👍 --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Nothing on spot-checks
 * 👍 --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Misc

 * Dead external link: Skyline Burgers at Zomato
 * Removed. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thrillist and Food Network, remove
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Page is stable
 * 👍 --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Nominator is majority author
 * 👍 --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Prose

 * MOS:CITELEAD
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Lead is very short, expand It
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * WP:QUOTEFARM, the Description section has too many quotes
 * "The Oregonian said Sky Two was "recently closed", as of August 1986." Is this quote necessary?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Heather Arndt Anderson said Skyline's burgers and shakes "are a testament to the utter pointlessness of reinventing the wheel"
 * -What does this quote mean?
 * Reinventing the wheel, suggesting she thinks the burgers and shakes are optimal. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Comment: Not that many discrete issues, but a few systemic ones. Page suffers from WP:PROMOTION to the point of reading like an advertisement and WP:QUOTEFARM. While I understand that the Reception section can have a bunch of quotes, the Description and History section suffer from overuse. I also made a few grammatical CEs, please review when able. Placing on hold for now. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 04:38, 19 August 2023 (UTC)


 * @Etriusus I've tried addressing your concerns. Please let me know if you think more is necessary for GA status. Thank you for reviewing! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:01, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for being patient, had some stuff in my personal life to take care of. I made some last-minute changes that I can see you've already acknowledged. All-in-all, thank you for making this an easy review, congrats on yet another GA!!! 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
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