Talk:Skyrush/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 21:25, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * Is there a link for "wing coaster".  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:48, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Hersheypark is linked twice in lede.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:48, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I see that Harobouri has already addressed these two points. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Link for "Spring Creek".  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:48, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * top 50 steel roller coasters in the world for several years - we should be a bit more specific.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:48, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

General

 * entitled Project 2012 - "entitled" doesn't mean what you think it means. Entitled is either someone feeling that they deserve something, or a military title.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I removed the word altogether, as it's not only wrong but also superfluous. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I didn't want to mention that ;).  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 22:12, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Same links from lede needed in body.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * during 2011–2012 - not the biggest fan of the - for dates. What about "in 2011 and 2012"?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Might be a project-wide thing, but is "characteristics" the right word for the section?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * This is common practice for similar articles about roller coasters, since the section describes the trains, track, and queue. I'm not sure if there's a better section title for these types of information. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * "Ride the Edge."[ - quotes that aren't full sentences should go inside the punctuation  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * saying: "The ascent - a few times you have done this. The quote should start with a lower case, unless it's a proper noun or the start of a new sentence.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * A few of these were complete sentences, so the first letter was capitalized. However, I lowercased the quotes that aren't complete sentences. Epicgenius (talk) 22:09, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 21:25, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * @Lee Vilenski, thanks for the review. I think all of the issues you've raised have been addressed now. – Epicgenius (talk) 22:10, 21 October 2022 (UTC)