Talk:Slender Oncoceratidae

Over-technical
It reads like a chapter from a very dry textbook. It uses a lot of technical terms, some of which don't appear in Wikipedia or Wiktionary, e.g. cyrtochoanitic, cyrtocone; even terms like Siphuncle which have their own article could be glossed. --Colapeninsula (talk) 16:59, 21 December 2011 (UTC)