Talk:Smoke Gets in Your Eyes (Mad Men)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:35, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:38, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: Just checking; any production number of Guest Stars that could be put in the box?
 * Lede: Link AMC
 * Lede: "…the viewer doesn't learn…" Don't use contractions
 * Lede: "…some of her coworkers . Junior…" Remove the space before the period
 * Lede: "…interest for Mad Men didn't…" Don't use 'didn't' -> "did not"
 * Plot: "having an Old Fashioned at a bar" What is this? Maybe a link would help
 * Plot: "enter into the premises" I would say "onto" instead of "into"
 * Conception: "Weiner's agents insisted he not" -> "Weiner's agents insisted that he not"
 * Conception: In the lede it states that the show was on hold for eight years, but in this section is says "next seven years"
 * Conception: "Movies were an influence [...]." -> "Movies were an influence".
 * Conception: Link AMC the first time it appears
 * References: Add "Academy of Television Arts & Sciences" as publisher for the emmys.com cites
 * References: Ref 35 has a funny bracket issue
 * References: Some newspapers have their owners in parenthesis (like 23) and others are just listed after the paper (like 26, 27, etc.) I'd pick one style to be consistent


 * I wasn't the nominator of this article, but I happened to stumble by, and most of the these were pretty quick fixes. The two not struck out are the ones I didn't deal with, as I thought it'd be better for the nominator to work on those. Drovethrughosts (talk) 22:04, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Many thanks Drovethrughosts! Everything should be good to go now. :) —DAP388 (talk) 23:45, 31 May 2012
 * Looks good! I will pass it now! Cheers.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:51, 31 May 2012 (UTC)