Talk:Sneak King/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:44, 7 January 2015 (UTC)

This review will be up soon. Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 23:44, 7 January 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * see lede comments below
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * Please add images on the gameplay if possible  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:07, 15 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for 7 days for concerns to be addressed.  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:07, 15 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * Please add images on the gameplay if possible  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:07, 15 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for 7 days for concerns to be addressed.  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:07, 15 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for 7 days for concerns to be addressed.  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:07, 15 January 2015 (UTC)

Well-Written

 * "the mascot for Burger King, in a" take off the comma.
 * "Players takes control of" - "Players take control of"
 * Gameplay states that there are two modes, while in the infobox there is only one.
 * Perhaps link to non-player characters
 * "A person with a burger" - this part is confusing to the reader. Please use "NPC" for consistency
 * Quotes need to be exactly as it is. "around them. 'They" should be "around them.'They"

Broad in coverage

 * Sorry if this is not specific enough. But can you add information from this book?

Listed fixes done, and yes, the manual reference was duplicated. The Changing the Game: How Video Games Are Transforming the Future of Business is not something I have full access to, but it largely duplicates the article in Game Developer. It pulls the same material in a very similar fashion with little added commentary. Yes, I could find a way to add it to the reflist - but I do not see much value in that source. Then again - I cannot see page 69 or 70. However, if you disagree with me, I will definitely try to work it in. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 22:45, 15 January 2015 (UTC)
 * The infobox still states that there is only one game mode.  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 17:06, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Mode does not refer to sand-box, challenge or other modes - it is a reference to single player or multiplayer. Template:Infobox video game states: "Modes - Playing modes offered by the game. Currently, the only accepted values are single-player, multiplayer, or both." Sorry for not addressing it in my first response . ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:26, 18 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Oops, didn't check the documentation. Passing for GA.