Talk:Snitching (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:45, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

It is only fair for me to review this, as you currently have quite a few noms pending! --K. Peake 20:45, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Change accidental listing of Tyga to Quavo, plus introduce him and Future as fellow rappers
 * "on hos upcoming album" → "on Migos' upcoming fourth studio album," with the wikilink
 * Shouldn't you mention the inspiration in the lead?
 * "his life while Quavo and Future rap about bringing" → "his life, while Quavo and Future rap to bring"
 * The body does not source critics praising the lyrics
 * Wikilink Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs instead, plus add a space before chart

Background

 * "who was considered a" → "who Pop Smoke considered a" to be specific
 * ❌ Here in the US, 6ix9ine is considered a "snitch" for ratting out on his gang so he didn't spend the rest of his life in prison.


 * "The songs beat was" → "The song's beat was"
 * "because at the time the former was just" → "because at the time, he was only"
 * "put it on his upcoming album" → "put it on his hip hop trio Migos' upcoming fourth studio album" for accuracy, with the pipe
 * "and asked him if he could be" → "and expressed a desire to be" per "Shit, let me go in on it." 2
 * "but did not respond." → "but the rapper did not respond."

Music and lyrics

 * [6] should be solely at the end of the para, as it's used for the last two sentences
 * "and the chorus while Pop Smoke and Future rap" → "and the chorus, while Pop Smoke and Future both rap" with the pipe
 * "about it (Shh)."" → "about it (Shh)"." per MOS:QUOTE (the source does not have the punctuation inside speech marks)
 * "Future tries to honor" → "Future appears to honor" per the source
 * Cut down the amount quoted from Quavo per WP:OVERQUOTE; it does look like you are trying to "sing the song"

Release and reception

 * "debut posthumous studio album" → "posthumous debut studio album"
 * Order by thematic element; try to place them praising
 * "standouts and highlights." → "standouts and highlights, respectively."
 * [13][11] should be put in numerical order
 * "opined the song one of more" → "opined that the song is one of the"

Credits and personnel

 * Songwriter should come before programming per the Tidal order

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but shouldn't be long since this is a relatively short article! --K. Peake 08:04, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Kyle Peake Thanks for the comments. I'm so close to making Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon a GT! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 16:44, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now; you accidentally removed the part about the instrumentation from the lead but I re-added for you! --K. Peake 18:31, 17 March 2021 (UTC)