Talk:Snow White with the Red Hair

Quick Assessments

 * I suggest following A Town Where You Live or NG Life as a structure reference.
 * Prose is poor with needless information (apple-red hair)
 * lack of clarity ("At the age of 12, he is often looked down upon and mistrusted by others in the palace, despite the fact that he is actually a genius." You mean he being discriminated for his youth, not a discriminated event in the past)
 * low accessibility (You're introducing Raji without context. If he is too insignificant for a mention, only introduce him in the plot summary).
 * Inconsistent date styles.
 * You can remove the Chinese dates and mention them shortly in prose form. The most significant dates and ISBN that should be listed are "Origin country" and English.
 * You can expand content by investigating magazine issues. Official websites may have an archive or you have to surf with wayback machine. Use Comic Holmes for a quick reference. Comic Holmes

If you want more comments, contact me. DragonZero ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 21:13, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

The two princes both have the same name, yet it is spelt differently for them here…

Zen Wistalia (ゼン・ウィスタリア Zen Wisutaria)

Izana Wistalia (イザナ・ ウイスタリア Izana Wishtaria)

They should both adhere to the same standard.

ogenstein (talk) 19:44, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Corrected.--Sakretsu (talk) 20:05, 22 August 2015 (UTC)