Talk:Snowy plover/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SilverTiger12 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this review; as a first note, though, the Greek χαραδριός needs to be in a template: χαραδριός. I would also prefer that it be paired with the word Romanized, e.g. "...αἴλουρος/ailurus meaning 'cat'..." (templates: αἴλουρος/ailurus ). Expect the rest of the review later today. Good luck and happy editing, SilverTiger12 (talk) 15:32, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Ok I tried. Not sure if it has to be charadrios or kharadriós; both seem to be valid. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:30, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for picking this up so quickly! It is my first bird article, and I am curious about your comments. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:30, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments: And that was basically the only issue I found. Nice work! --SilverTiger12 (talk) 01:07, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Conspecifics? Do you mean other male snowy plovers? If so, then just say, "..attempt to intimidate each other..." You use the odd "conspecific" later on in that same paragraph; it's a bit jargon-y so you might want to change it there too.
 * Thank you! I replaced the jargon term with "intruders". Your suggestion with "each other" does not entirely work because the sentence indicates that it is only the defending plover who intimidates. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 01:43, 18 November 2023 (UTC)