Talk:Snuffy's Parents Get a Divorce/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:49, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I have asked for a second opinion. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:24, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Second opinion
Overall, the article looks good. It's nicely sourced and written. However, I have some concerns.

- Is the lead supposed to have that many citations in it? I guess considering the subject matter, and the way it's presented, this could be an exception.

- Some paragraphs have only one sentence. Are you unable to combine them into other paragraphs?

Those are my concerns with the article. Otherwise, it looks great! CarpetCrawler (talk) 05:50, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Per the discussion between ThinkBlue and I
We will put this article on hold for seven days. After my concerns are addressed, we ask that you send us a message on our talkpages. Then we will most surely pass this article. Thanks, good work and good luck! CarpetCrawler (talk) 22:20, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I have one concern. Reference 23 is missing Publisher info., an accessdate, date, etc. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:52, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The seven days have been up, and with consultation with CarpetCrawler, I've decided to fail the article. If the one comment above can be addressed, then the article may be renominated for GA. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:23, 29 March 2009 (UTC)