Talk:So Happy I Could Die/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 22:13, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

Hello, i'll be reviewing this article from Saturday 2 June 2012. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 22:13, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

Review
Ok, let's do this.

Overview

 * As a whole, the article seems to be complete, it meets all guidelines.

Prose comments

 * Lead
 * "sexual themes such as lesbianism and masturbation."
 * The article body doesn't mention "lesbianism", so it could be considered original research. I recommend to write it as: "Aside from the prevalent ideas of alcoholism, "So Happy I Could Die" [also] explores [several] sexual themes on its lyrics." and leave the specific for the body, and then avoid giving the reader a somehow biased impression of the song. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)




 * Composition
 * "According to Musicnotes.com, a publication of Sony/ATV Music Publishing," >> "According to music sheet published by Sony/ATV Music Publishing on Musicnotes.com"
 * What is written reads like Musicnotes.com is a publication of Sony/ATV Music Publishing, and what is supposed to be expressed is that Sony/ATV Music Publishing published wheet music of the song on Musicnotes.com. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)




 * Reception
 * "produced varying responses from commentators." >> "received mixed critical response from most music critics" is more clearer and avoids ambiguity. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Minor edits

 * I broke the reflist into 2 columns for better structuration (m) -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I modified the chart table to indtroduce the singlechart (m) -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I will move the image to the left and we're almost good to go. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 20:05, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok. it's done. Now it looks better. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 20:07, 2 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Notes
 * A phrase that i felt was OR and trivia was already deleted. -- Hahc21 [ <font color="RED">TALK ] [ <font color="GREEN">CONTRIBS  ] 19:36, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I did that.

Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 19:49, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict
Perfect, everything has been fized by now. My verdict:

Final comment: Good job. Incredible article. Just minor issues had to be fixed. Aside that, everything was very well. -- Hahc21 [ <font color="RED">TALK ] [ <font color="GREEN">CONTRIBS  ] 22:18, 2 June 2012 (UTC)