Talk:So Seductive/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * "So Seductive" is a song by American rapper Tony Yayo... → Make the sentence end there to comply with WP:BEGINNING Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * ...reaching number 48 on the US Billboard Hot 100:... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Background

 * ...of 50 Cent's album Get Rich or Die Tryin'... → Add year of release for "Get Rich or Die Tryin'" Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * The group also released their debut album, Beg for Mercy... → Add year of release for "Beg for Mercy" Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * ...which involved wearing "Free Yayo" shirts advertising his situation... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * ...after receiving a call from the Shady Records offices advising him to do so:[4] → At semi-colon at end Done  I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * ...titled Thoughts of a Predicate Felon, almost immediately after leaving prison... → Put year of release for album in parentheses Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Writing and composition

 * According to WP:SAMPLE, an audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 21 seconds and is currently 23 seconds) Done (shortened to 19 seconds) I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  15:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * No issues

Music video

 * No issues

Live performances

 * No issues

Awards and nominations

 * Get rid of this section, but put information in prose form in "Critical reception" section Done I Am Rufus   &bull;  Conversation is a beautiful thing.  08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

 * No issues

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts

 * No issues

Radio and release history

 * No issues