Talk:So Yesterday/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * breakup with her boyfriend declaring -> boyfriend,
 * contemporary critics -> I don't think we can call them contemporary lol.
 * who broke up with her -> I don't like this, try re-wording
 * and Best of Hilary Duff (2008). It is also featured on the music video game Band Hero -> make one sentence. (2008) and on the music '''

Background

 * I don't see how the first 3 lines are relevant to this article. This is not her singing debut. It would go well on her bio or first single.
 * by "The Matrix", for Metamorphosis -> too repetitive. Try the album

Composition

 * Nice

Release and reception

 * Really nice!

Chart performance

 * Good

Music video

 * Good

Live performances

 * Nice

Overall

 * I'm really impressed Novice, you might soon have to change your name to Pro :P. Fix this and you've got yourself a GA :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   23:39, 13 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much. I actually learned a lot from your GAs. Novice7 | Talk 05:12, 14 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank yoou :). Your all good!-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   06:14, 14 December 2010 (UTC)