Talk:Sobha (company)/Archive 1

Hi Friends This for Testing
Someone should make note on the page that Sobha uses spam and deceptive practices to promote itself and the page is largely Sobha lies about itself. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 117.55.193.17 (talk) 08:27, 29 November 2014 (UTC)

News release tag
Dear Brianhe

This article looks fine & neutral is it good to remove this tag ?

If yes please suggest the procedure to remove.

--Deepak HM 07:32, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Deepakhmwiki
 * It looks pretty promotional to me so I think the tag remains appropriate. It was placed by . The article's bulk, and the bulk of its references, are about its charitable endeavours and awards, which is not well balanced. In fact it's hard to tell what they actually do. — Brianhe (talk) 12:58, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your review Brianhe & feedback.

Should i restructure the content & share here on user talk page? if it looks approprite, you can either permit me to edit on the page or you can take it live.

Please do let me know If that sounds good, once fixed with this article issues I will concentrate on many other artciles with similar issues

--Deepak HM 08:02, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Dear Brianhe

Can this news be added on article page?

Sobha bags two prestigious awards at Realty Plus Conclave & Excellence Awards 2015- South

--Deepak HM 11:51, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Adding New section Services
Dear Brianhe,

Adding few sections like

1. Services 2. Operations 3. Employees

Will help this article to regain neutrality ?

--Deepak HM 09:03, 6 November 2015 (UTC) Deepakhmwiki

Article is neutralised
Dear Brianhe ,

Plese check the article for its neutral tonality edited as per wiki guidelines & do let me know if issue persists still.

--Deepak HM 13:22, 18 November 2015 (UTC)Deepakhmwiki
 * Regarding this and the other pings to me. I'm not interested in working on this article anymore. You might get want to notify other volunteer editors at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject India or Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Business. - Brianhe (talk) 21:34, 18 November 2015 (UTC)

Removing Warning Tag
I have removed as whatever was the promotional content it has been neutralized. The subject is notable and if any correction needed moderators are most welcome to improve the article.

--Deepak HM 11:56, 20 November 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deepakhmwiki (talk • contribs)