Talk:Soccer in the Sand

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2019 and 10 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Baelynnmcg.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Article Evaluation (Wiki Ed)
Hello, I have recently evaluated this article as part of my English class. I made some notes about how it could be improved. Some of the things I noticed your article didn't have include not going into detail about the description of the game. By going into detail of the game you could have included more about it such as what the players wear, the names of the positions and what their job is in that position, the concept of the game, and a list of the rules during the games. If you do this you will add other sources and make the article broader and possibly get more views within a more detailed, longer article. I also might edit this article in the future for another part of my English class.

Baelynnmcg (talk) 17:10, 7 February 2019 (UTC)