Talk:Social work/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 19:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Phlsph7 (talk · contribs) 09:33, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Hello and thanks the improvements to this article. However, despite the improvements, the article fails criterion 2b since there are too many unreferenced paragraphs. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "Other important historical figures that shaped", "In Ontario, the regulator, the Ontario College of Social Workers", and "After Independence in 1947, general hospital psychiatry units" as well as various "citation needed" tags. According to criterion 2b, these passages require inline citations "no later than the end of the paragraph". I suggest that you add all the relevant references before a renomination.

A few other observations Phlsph7 (talk) 09:33, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
 * WP:EARWIG shows a few potential copyright violations but the detections seem to be triggered by quotations that are properly cited in our article.
 * the article has the following maintenance tags: 1x need quotation to verify, 6x citation needed, 2x dead link, 2x full citation needed, 3x page needed, 1x permanent dead link
 * the section "Definition" should probably not be entirely made up of quotations.
 * in the first sentence of the section "Definition", the expression "Social work" should not be bold.
 * the section "Theoretical models and practices" contains a lengthy list of links to articles discussing theories. It would be better to replace this with prose explaining the most important theories.
 * should this be "... emerged in the 1980s."?
 * replace "indulges" with "indulge" and remove "the"
 * add "the" before "age".