Talk:Sociology of childhood

Clarity
Does anyone else feel like the word structure and vocabulary of this page is unclear? Although whoever wrote this may have felt smarter by using complicated structure and vocabulary, they were not. They didn't even seem to fully understand the meaning of the words they were using. They were just unclear and thus unhelpful. Don't use complicated words and sentences where simple ones would suffice. Anyway, I didn't really write all of this to complain about whoever wrote the page...i just wanted to know if anyone else feels this page is unclear.