Talk:Sociology of leisure/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)

As discussed at the draft GA nom, I believe this article meets the criteria. Here are some further suggestions for improvement: Otherwise, looks good. I'm going to pass it now, but I encourage you to keep working on it to make it even better. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Over-linking: some terms are linked multiple times, some commonplace terms are linked unnecessarily.
 * Prose: good enough for GA standard, but would recommend finding someone to copy-edit
 * Some of the "Further reading" entries could be incorporated as references or used to expand the article
 * An image would be nice