Talk:Soeprapto (prosecutor)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:54, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:54, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "After transferring often, the early 1940s he had" in the early


 * "head of the court for Native Indonesians there" rm there


 * "Soeprapto went to directly" went directly


 * "For fifteen years he worked at various Landraad, " not sure what this is meant to say, reword. maybe say "in various locations" or something like that if that's what is implied.


 * "the landraad " Landraad


 * "Although the nascent army was able to hold the peace during riots at the end of 1945, when the Dutch began a major assault on Java." Sentence fragment, needs fixing, plus you use the same ref twice at the end of the sentence, so one can be rm'd.


 * "In 1950 Soeprapto" comma after 1950.


 * "In January of 1951" rm of


 * "In 1953 he" comma after 1953


 * "then Minister without Folio," not sure what that means; perhaps add something to clarify?
 * ✅ I wikilinked it.


 * Any years on the marriages? I imagine not since they would have been added, but thought I'd ask.
 * Not in the summary that is online. It could theoretically be in the book, but finding said book would be a pain in the train (very few Indonesian books are reprinted, and initial print runs can be quite small; for example, large publishing houses like Gramedia may only print up 3,000 copies [www.webcitation.org/642MmP31v (indicated here)]

I'll put the article on hold for a week and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:44, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
 * K, everything is done. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:45, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:39, 25 December 2011 (UTC)