Talk:Soft Light (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:03, 23 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * Match with other X-Files article by linking season 2, then removed the other lists at the very bottom of the infobox
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede
 * Episode can't really "premiered" how about "originally aired"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics. → The episode generally received positive reviews from television critics.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "like". Isn't really a word you want here. How about "such as"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot
 * Nothing; Huh 0)
 * Production
 * "huge" is not needed; same for "even" kind of WP:NPOV
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Who was it directing by ;( James A. Contner is very sad right now. Lol
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Broadcast and reception
 * "Soft Light" was first broadcast in the United States on May 5, 1995, on the Fox Broadcasting Company → "Soft Light" originally aired on the Fox network on May 5, 1995.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * UK airing, perhaps?
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References
 * Ref. 6: "Sci-Fi Blast From The Past - Tony Shalhoub (The X-Files)" The - should be an en dash as per WP:DASH.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 6: How is that a good source
 * Firstly, it's a primary source-based interview, so its notable. Secondly, the author is a regular contributor to Andrew Morton's website/newspaper, The Morton Report, so he isn't just a random crackpot Link-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Fox Broadcasting Company", not "corporation"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 9: Doubled periods with Time, Inc., which should be Time, Inc
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * External links
 * on TheXFiles.com should use "at"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki". Repetitive. How about: "The X-Files, an external wiki"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

On hold. Good work. TBrandley 17:25, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * There, I believe I've gotten everything. Thank you for the review.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:59, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Will pass the artcle. Congrats! TBrandley 23:14, 30 July 2012 (UTC)