Talk:Solo (concert residency)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ZooBlazer (talk · contribs) 22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

I've done DYK, FLC, and FAC reviews involving your articles, so I figured I might as well complete the foursome (is that the right word?) by doing a GA review. I should have my comments posted later today or tomorrow. --  Zoo Blazer  22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Just some small things to clean up and then I'll do spotchecks. --  Zoo Blazer  00:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking up this review. And for doing this milestone of completing the foursome ;) Pseud 14 (talk) 01:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * Comprising six shows --> Should it be comprising of six shows?
 * This edit actually suggests that comprise of is poor phrasing in Wikipedia. So I changed it to consisting of. (A patrol editor had fixed that before)


 * receiving praise for its theme and Velasquez's vocal abilities and connection with the audience --> Comma after "abilities"
 * Done

Background and development

 * On August 3, 2022, Velasquez --> Velasquez should be linked as it's the first mention of her outside the lead.
 * Linked. Wrote her full name on first instance


 * she would be performing a concert residency --> also link concert residency for the same reason as above
 * Linked


 * I'll leave it up to you, but social media accounts could be linked as well, but I could see an argument for WP:OVERLINK.
 * That makes sense, I've linked


 * announced that Solo will be staged --> should it be would be staged now that everything is past tense? I notice you use was in the next sentence for promotion.
 * You're right, as this was in the past. Changed.


 * Are ticket prices necessary to include?
 * I've removed its mention

Concert synopsis

 * Is the synopsis written in present or past tense? Is starts out past tense, then it becomes present tense. Then switches back to past tense.
 * My bad. Missed to changed those instances. Should be in the past tense now.


 * Madonna's "Crazy for You" which --> add a comma before "which"
 * Done


 * She proceeded with and She then started --> Maybe adjust the wording of one of these sentences to not both start with "she" back to back.
 * Revised

Critical response

 * In a review of the opening night, Leah Salterio writing for ABS-CBNnews.com highly praised --> I think there should be a comma after .com
 * Also should ABS-CBNnews.com be in italics?
 * Delink the site as well, as it is a WP:DUPLINK
 * All done

Images

 * For the infobox image, can you link a source where iMusic Entertainment posted it?
 * I have added the link to its Facebook page where the poster was taken

Spotchecks
Using this version of the article: Spotchecks all support the information the refs are used for in the article. Earwig picked up no major issues.
 * [1] - Looks good
 * [5] - Looks good
 * [8] - Looks good
 * [10] - Looks good
 * [11] - Looks good

Discussion
Thank you as always for reviewing my nomination. All comments actioned and look forward to the rest. Pseud 14 (talk) 01:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Happy with the changes. Spotchecks look good and no issues detected by earwig. Happy to pass! --  Zoo Blazer  02:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)