Talk:Solomon Islands at the 1996 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 18:06, 29 August 2018 (UTC)

Hi ! I am going to review this article as well. I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 18:06, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'll look at this and the other review tonight, I promise! Courcelles (talk) 18:08, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Copyedit
 * Here is my copyedit. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 18:11, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Prose & MOS
 * Per MOS:DUPLINK, I would remove at least the last instance of all the athlete's names. Since the article is so short, I would probably just link in the lead and the table.
 * Recommend using the Abbr template in the first table for "n/a"
 * Be consistent with capitalization of n/a (or N/A)
 * Was there a flag bearer?
 * "Nester Geniwala'a was 19 years of age at the time, and making her only Olympic appearance" - this sentence has a weird structure. Later you say "Tony Analau was 27 years old at the time of the Atlanta Olympics, and was making his Olympic debut" - I prefer that version, stating that they made their debut, because conceivably they could qualify for another Olympics (even though this is unlikely based on their age).
 * Explain the strike through in the 80 in the second table using a key. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 18:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Images
 * No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 18:06, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * References
 * Are there any other references you can include? The article relies almost completely on one source (Sports Reference).
 * You archived all of the citations, even though all the pages are live? Is there a reason why?
 * All other references, formatting, and inline locations look good. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 18:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Overall
 * Overall, looks good. Just some minor items noted above. Placing on hold. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 18:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Everything taken care of, added some footnotes to the IOC and to the official report, rephrased as requested, and the archival is "just in case" mostly. .  Thanks! Courcelles (talk) 16:40, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I made a small edit. Hope you don't mind. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:45, 4 September 2018 (UTC)