Talk:Soma Bringer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: JDC808 (talk · contribs) 17:17, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

First para: Second para:
 * Lead
 * Link "dungeon", "real-time combat" (not sure of the correct link for that), and "top-down perspective". "three-dimensional" and "Multiplayer" could also be linked.
 * role-playing game can be linked.
 * Spell out "co-op" and link it (in parenthesis, you could put "co-op" and use that shorthand from thereafter).

First para: Second para: Third para:
 * Gameplay
 * Anything that I said to link above that isn't already linked here, link them here as well.
 * single player -> single-player (and make sure any other instance of "single player" includes the dash).
 * the players control -> the player controls
 * "...are mapped to the DS face buttons." Spell out Nintendo DS, link it, and make it possessive.
 * respawn - > respawns
 * Link buffs and debuffs


 * Synopsis
 * "At some point prior to the game's opening, mysterious monsters called Visitors being appearing..." I believe that is supposed to be "began appearing"?


 * Development
 * Since I said to link Nintendo DS above in Gameplay, unlink it here.

These are what I saw on the first read through. Also did some minor copy/editing. After you've addressed these, I'll have a second read through. -- JDC808  ♫  18:18, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
 * I've addressed the issues you raised above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:31, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

Verdict
Nice article. -- JDC808  ♫  18:50, 4 January 2017 (UTC)