Talk:Somebody Else’s Prince

Hello, your link to your author is to an American aviator of the same name. Here is the link i believe you meant to include. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evelyn_Sharp_(suffragist)

Suggestions for Article
Hello, this is an excellent and informative page and I like that your introduction is strong and to the point, and that you included sections like Re-occuring Themes and Character Description. Suggestions I would make that may be beneficial to your article, is to add some key points of the story in your introduction, such as the protagonist and the protagonist's intentions, which could help the reader understand the essence of the story. My suggestion in regards to the plot summary would be that instead of reiterating the story almost verbatim,   create a more concise plot summary by condensing certain moments in the story, and excluding others if they are unnecesary aspects of the story. I think this could help the efficiency of the readers that come across your page. Again, this is a really good and informative article! Yffub15 (talk) 20:50, 15 February 2013 (UTC)