Talk:Sometime Samurai/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:29, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

I will go through this completely today! --K. Peake 07:29, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "for Tei's studio album" → "for Tei's fifth studio album,"
 * "It was originally recorded as" → "The song was originally recorded as"
 * "The track remained unfinished for" → "It remained unfinished for"
 * For consistency, only use the song instead of the track
 * "In "Sometime Samurai", a" → "In it, a"
 * Mention the ceremony separately from the MTV Award's name and wikilink it too
 * "Tei played "Sometime Samurai" during" → "Tei played the song during"
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * First para looks good!
 * "Despite the smooth collaboration" should either use the plural collaborations or collaboration process
 * "Scotland, and the UK." → "Scotland and the UK." unless the comma is a rule in Japanese
 * The word either is not used by the source
 * "for three hours." → "for around three hours."
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Production and composition

 * Img looks good!
 * ""Sometime Samurai" is a" → "Musically, "Sometime Samurai" is a" but where are these genres sourced?
 * Tei said the song is rock to him and Grunebaum noted its house beat. Damian Vo (talk) 15:48, 29 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Pipe Japanese Curry to Japanese curry
 * "Wave era," highlighting its" → "Wave era", highlighting its" per MOS:QUOTE
 * Lowercase the Knacks per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "mark the first inclusion" → "marked the first inclusion"
 * "of "Sometime Samurai," Tei" → "of "Sometime Samurai", Tei"
 * "with the line" → "with the lyrics,"
 * "drew a comparison" shouldn't this info all be present tense per it being a book?
 * "Baker further suggested that" → "He further suggested that"
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Release and promotion

 * "In November, remixes of" → "In November 2005, remixes of"
 * No reviews to be added?
 * Those two reviews are the only sources I could find since SM is only a promo single in Japan, and Tei did not release Flash in the US. Damian Vo (talk) 15:18, 29 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Img looks good!
 * Shouldn't the author review use present tense?
 * "from February to May." → "from February to May 2005." per this being a new para
 * Rest soon; sorry I don't have the time to finish today.
 * Thank you so much for reviewing this. I addressed the issues you mentioned above. There is no rush on this, so please take your time :D Damian Vo (talk) 15:34, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * That is fine, I am glad you understood me moving the remainder of this review to today! --K. Peake 18:24, 29 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Wikilink music video
 * Baring in mind WP:TVPLOT, could you not add more info that you know about the video?
 * Sadly the only "legit" reference about the video I could find is Andrew's, which is 2 sentences long. Damian Vo (talk) 01:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Minogue did not appear" → "Minogue does not appear"
 * Again, should comma be used before "and" in Japanese?
 * "of "GBI (German Bold Italic)," and" → "of "GBI (German Bold Italic)", and" plus mention it was staff for those reviews
 * The source does not mention The O2 Arena
 * The O2 Arena is mentioned on the front cover artwork of the DVD, hence the media note. Damian Vo (talk) 01:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Formats and track listings

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Websites

 * Cite news.com.au as publisher instead
 * Pipe Warner Music Japan to Warner Music Group
 * Pipe Tower Records Japan to Tower Records
 * Fix MOS:CAPS issues with "Guest: TOWA TEI"
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Print sources

 * Good

Media notes

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this is now done on time! --K. Peake 18:24, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I believe I have addressed all your comments. Thanks again for reviewing yet another one of my articles! Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, there was one ref misformatted that I forgot but I fixed the capitals issue now! --K. Peake 18:55, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! Good luck with the Backlog Drive this month! Damian Vo (talk) 02:41, 1 September 2023 (UTC)