Talk:Somnium (novel)

Imaginative viewpoint
I think the most famous part is where Kepler gives an account of how the earth would look as seen from the moon (phases etc.); he was pretty much the first to do something like that... AnonMoos (talk) 00:09, 30 June 2010 (UTC)

Duracotus does not in fact travel to the moon -- the daemon only describes the moon to him. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.178.65.194 (talk) 09:11, 1 July 2010 (UTC)

I would like to expand the Science part, but I'm not sure how to do that. Do I specifically use what's in the book or do I use Kepler's notes to elaborate on each science point?Ender0051 (talk) 05:39, 11 November 2013 (UTC)

Peer review of your article "Cell Theory" by a fellow student of History of Science course
The “Plot summary” section is very well written and offers a good synopsis of Somnium. The Science” section could use some aesthetic improvement, however. The subsections “Levania”, “Privolva”, and “Subvolva” do not have enough content to warrant being broken up as opposed to being read as one section. You could either combine this information or expand on each subsection and make them more substantial. Also, I recommend adding citations in the “Science” section to add verifiability to your article. Overall, this is great work and with a little more tweaking, this could be a very well-developed, informative article. --IndigoDeberry (talk) 01:42, 19 November 2013 (UTC)