Talk:Son of a Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article and have found a few nitpicks. Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)


 * ""Son of a Gun" was written by James Yoshimura based on a story by executive producer Tom Fontana, and was directed by Nick Gomez. It was the first Homicide: Life on the Street episode written by Yoshimura, who would serve as a writer and eventually supervising producer throughout the entirety of the series.[1] "Son of a Gun" featured a blending of hard-edged emotion and amusing character comedy, the combination of which would become common in future Yoshimura-penned episodes.[2] "Son of a Gun" was originally supposed to be the fourth episode of the first season of Homicide:" - Three out of four sentences contain the article name.
 * Fixed. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Having read a couple of the articles now on this TV series, it there any explanation for why the episodes are continuing a downward trend in viewership, despite raves by critics?
 * Not that I've found, at least not at this early stage in the series... —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Everything else about the article seems fine. Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the article. Xtzou ( Talk ) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

A fine GA. Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * I corrected a few minor wording and punctuation issues.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Article is well sourced. I see no original research.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * The article remains focused on the subject but covers the relevant areas.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: A wonderful, concise article
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall: A wonderful, concise article
 * Pass/Fail: