Talk:Songbird Sings the Classics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

This should be a nice, smooth review! --K. Peake 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after Regine Velasquez in the first sentence
 * Done


 * "as its sponsor." → "as the sponsor."
 * Done


 * Pipe 1960s to 1960s in music
 * Done


 * Pipe 1970s to 1970s in music
 * Done


 * Remove the introduction to Gerard Salonga per it being done in the body
 * Removed and tweaked


 * "the intimate show and Velasquez's and" → "the intimate show, and Velasquez's and"
 * Done

Thanks for the initial comments. Actioned per responses above. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:52, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I meant pipe to the plural for the 1960s and 1970s music articles; do this in the body too, please. --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I see what you mean. Done (I think) Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and development

 * "It marked her first collaboration" → "It marked Velasquez's first collaboration"
 * "with his sister Lea Salonga." → "with his sister Lea." per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * Done above

Synopsis and reception

 * "into a Henry Mancini tribute number," → "into a Mancini tribute number,"
 * "The next number saw her perform" → "The next number saw Velasquez perform"
 * "she stood next to" → "Velasquez stood next to"
 * "He highlighted how" → "Cruz highlighted how"
 * Done above

Broadcast and recordings

 * Use the full name of RPN
 * Wikilink live album
 * Mention that the certification was in the Philippines and how many units it represents
 * I added the number of units sold and included a source for shipments of albums required to achieve platinum status. Same source can be found in her discography. As for adding Philippines, the certifying body (PARI) already mentions that, so I think it would be redundant to add it again.

Set list

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; shouldn't take long at all especially with your speed! --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking up this review K. Peake. I have addressed your comments and provided my responses above. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, great job on this! --K. Peake 20:17, 9 August 2023 (UTC)