Talk:Songs of Experience (David Axelrod album)/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:20, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * "album Song of Innocence, he composed" -> "album Song of Innocence, Axelrod composed" (because you've mentioned other people between here and the last mention of Axelrod).
 * Looks like Blake's work was "Songs of Innocence and of Experience" (i.e. note the second "of").
 * "Like on his 1968" would prefer "As he had on his 1968..."
 * "gatefold LP" just links to gatefold so no need to include LP in the link. Particularly as you later link LP individually.
 * Was it Axelrod who "dubbed the album..."? If so, attribute that quote accordingly.
 * No author of liner notes indicated; changed to "liner notes stated". Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * "of majesty and "pastoral sadness", respectively" why only half of this in quotes?
 * Only "pastoral sadness" is taken verbatim from the source cited. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Allmusic -> AllMusic.
 * Any information on sales statistics from the original or the reissue?
 * Unfortunately no, either because it's not a notable enough release or the sales were non-existent. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Could split refs into two columns.
 * Allmusic, gatefold comments above apply in refs too.
 * Spaced hyphens in ref titles should be replaced with spaced en-dashes (endash) per WP:DASH.
 * This was the only one I could find the ref titles. Let me know if there are any others. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

A few comments, so I'll put the article on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Addressed most points in this edit. Let me know if I overlooked something. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)