Talk:Sonic Heroes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: P*h3i (talk · contribs) 09:22, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

The following is a review of the English Wikipedia article Sonic Heroes, as of revision 832567539 (by, at 14:29 on 13 March 2018). All "suggested changes" are only suggestions; anyone is welcome to address their concerns or debate them in the "post-review comments". It's suggested that to find a listed error, copy the text (Ctrl/Cmd+C) in the Quote column and use the find function (Ctrl/Cmd+F) in the article.

Infobox
No issues found.

Lead

 * Which reviewers specifically found it an improvement over the Adventure games? Are the few that did really a consensus broad enough to be included in the lead?

Development
No issues found. Factual basis confirmed.

Final opinion
I will put the GAN on hold until the minor issues presented are fixed or proved otherwise. The hold time is specifically 7 days. If all issues are fixed within seven days, then Sonic Heroes will become a good article. If not, then the article will fail the GAN and will be able to be re-nominated at a later date. If there are any disputes with suggested changes, please write them in the Post-review comments section and we can discuss them and possibly make the GAN open to required second opinion. This 7-day period also acts as a period of time for anyone unbiased to add their own review in the comments.

~ P*h3i   (📨)  02:42, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Pre-review comments
Working on it now. ~ P*h3i   (📨)  09:22, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

Almost done, just checking all the references now. Expect it up in the next few days. ~ P*h3i   (📨)  01:30, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Really sorry about how late this review is. Some things have come up that I need to deal with in real life. Expect a finished review within the next week. ~ P*h3i   (📨)  06:22, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Responses
Thanks for reviewing again, ! Just a few responses: Otherwise I've implemented all of your suggestions (or made edits based on them). JOE BRO  64  12:02, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) I've reworded the part in the lead about it being an improvement over Sonic Adventure. Most reviewers did say that (someone disputed saying "most", though, so I had to change it), so I think it's important enough.
 * 2) At the end, Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles start running away and Sonic explicitly states "Alright! Our next adventure awaits us so there's no time to waste!" Plot sections are typically assumed to be sourced to the game itself, so it doesn't need a source.
 * 3) I've added a link to clipping (computer graphics), so if someone doesn't know what "clipping" is they can just click on the link.
 * Alright, sounds good. This article looks GA-worthy to me. ~ P*h3i   (📨)  12:26, 7 April 2018 (UTC)