Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog (character)/to do


 * These tasks can be addressed in any order:

Prose
 * Focus article on the character Sonic, and his creation and evolution. Reduce discussion about the games in general
 * Edit sections from an out-of-universe perspective where possible.
 * Copyedit sentences with redundant words. (See: How to satisfy Criterion 1a)
 * Replace references to concept-mobius and ghz with suitable (quoted) references using cite video game where possible.
 * Remove fancrufty comments about speculation and fan tastes. (e.g. is Shadow or Metal Sonic more popular, etc.)
 * Remove original research. (Metal Sonic's current location, reasons behind talking, etc.)
 * Reformat external links in the text as footnote references.
 * Clean up the article to use the same person, in particular, do not intermix you/we.
 * Use the dash guidlines consistently.
 * Use consistent punctuation.
 * Add Ryan Drummond to the "Voice portrayal" section. He was the official voice of Sonic for six years and yet he's mysteriously absent in this section.
 * Remove pointless lists.
 * All plot should be written in present tense.
 * Add overall article template for all Sonic character articles for uniformity
 * Remove the fact that he is uninterested in martial proposals from Amy Rose. You never know...

Images
 * NB: Try to make sure that downsized transparent PNGs do not have a black background in IE.