Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog Pocket Adventure/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 10:32, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this eventually. Cognissonance (talk) 10:32, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * "highly positive reviews" pops out at me as potentially WP:POV. I'd suggest removing "highly" from the lead and reception.
 * Done

Gameplay

 * "There is a time trial mode which will tank the player" Does this refer to a tank being filled or the informal use of "to fail"? I think clarification is in order.
 * LOL, typo. Should say RANK
 * "two competitive two player modes" If it means what I think it means, there needs to be a hyphen between "two" and "player".
 * yes, changed

Development and release

 * "the creators of the handheld Neo Geo Pocket Color system, SNK" reads like it refers to SNK as a handheld system. Name SNK before the system to clarify.
 * Rewrote the sentence
 * Add link to 8-bit.
 * done
 * "The game was released in Japan two weeks later" This must be more specific to justify the exact date in the infobox, along with a source that substantiates this, as ref. 9 (IGN) doesn't specify. If ref. 11 (Arcade) does, ignore the additional sourcing.
 * added IGN source with exact date

Overall
I have a soft spot for smaller articles like this. Nice work. Cognissonance (talk) 12:08, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. Thanks for the review. TarkusAB talk 00:19, 13 February 2018 (UTC)