Talk:Sonnet 28/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:09, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Will have this one to you soon ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 22:09, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Initial comments

 * "it highlights the Renaissance ideal of male fidelity and equality" - Renaissance should be linked to something if it is capitalised (or a an actual term)
 * "Similar to Sonnet 27, Sonnet 28 ends comparably — in an unhappy state" - is there a need for a hyphen here? Seems a bit disjointed here. Could easily be read as just Similar to Sonnet 27, Sonnet 28 ends similarly in an unhappy state
 * Is there any need for the Original text section as the text is also in the table in the lead section? This section (though it is just the actual sonnet) is also unreferenced.
 * "Dympna Callaghan asserts that the sonnet" - who is this!?
 * It would be helpful if the Paraphrase could have more content in it, as currently it only comprises of a large quote from Callaghan
 * "Peter Hyland contends that" - who is this? An historian?

On hold
I support the fact that this article is for educational purposes and from the previous two Sonnets I have reviewed, I understand that Shakespearean articles take a different approach to Wikipedia and GANs. If all of the above can be addressed, then there is a possibility of this being promoted to GA. I'll leave this on hold for the standard seven days. Thanks! ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 17:37, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Close - not listed
I'm sorry but I'm going to have to close this due to inactivity. It has been over seven days and the article has been untouched. Please re-nominate once you're ready ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 16:32, 7 February 2015 (UTC)