Talk:Sonny's Blues

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2019 and 30 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ay-austin32, Lettmags.

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The last line in the first para of this article says that Sonny's friend informs that he would be let out and be all alone. But in the text the friend says that they would let him (Sonny) out and the addiction would start all over again. "They'll let him out and then it'll start all over again."

The second para of the article has the line,"At this point we learn how Sonny is related to the narrator.." But even before this when the brother is in his classroom after class hours, he hears the laughter of children playing and he says that he was listening to the noises made by the children as he was thinking of his brother. He, thus reveals his relationship at this juncture itself.

The fourth para starts thus, "The narrator then thinks back to the last time..." Shouldn't it be recalls instead of 'thinks back'?

In the fifth para, a line starts like this, "Both of these...". I guess it should be "Both these".

The pronoun 'they' is missing in the second line of the 8th para. "They see each other intermittently and whenever they do" 117.243.20.12 (talk) 11:11, 20 January 2016 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Sonny%27s_Blues&action=edit&section=1

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