Talk:Sonya Renee Taylor

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Great start and a great page idea. There are a few typos in here and I agree with your classmates re: sections and the block quotes. Also, remember all the ways you can expand and contextualize that I suggested when we met re: spoken word as hip hop.--JustJess PhD (talk) 13:19, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Lookin' good!I'm looking forward to reading your page because i must admit that i am not very knowledgeable about this person. your citations are good and you're starting off well.i recommend some minor changes, like adding movement to the "body is not an apology" subsection...if there is any information on her earlier life and events that led her to becoming the person she is today, i think you should add those as well. i found an interview too. http://inkblotarts.org/when-we-say-yes-an-interview-with-sonya-renee-taylor-of-the-body-is-not-an-apology/. Good luck ! MBAILEY004 (talk) 21:25, 5 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm also excited to read your article once it's completed because I don't know much about this individual either. Great variation of citations so far, just remember to make a references heading, just like you did with the other sections of your page and then add the code Reflist (with surrounding the word) after you make the section labeled Referance. All of your citations will fall under there and not under a subsection that is about a part of your topic! Also, I think that the quote within the "body is not an apology" subsection could be turned into a block quote, would would be more visually flow-y (info on how to do that here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Block_quotations). Really good job so far! Tyeargin92 (talk) 22:20, 5 March 2015 (UTC)