Talk:Sopiko Guramishvili/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

I think this one has been sitting in the queue for long enough! —  Ghost River  14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

Early life and background

 * WL the first instance of Georgia (country)
 * MOS:OVERLINK discourages linking countries. I usually only link countries once in the infobox (as I did with the Netherlands). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces that they weren't using" "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces not being used"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Change note [a] so that it reads "with a score of 7 points in 11 games (7/11), and the note just explains that a win is one point, a draw is 1/2, and a loss is 0
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * On that note, please add a citation to the note explaining how scoring works; it seems common sense, but if it must be explained in the article, then it should be cited.
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

2002-06

 * Write out and WL the first instance of the Fédération Internationale des Échecs (FIDE)
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "starting at 2142" "ranked at 2142"
 * It's a rating, not a ranking. (I didn't want to write "rated at 2142" to avoid repeating "rating" in the sentence.)
 * "At the former in Budva in Montenegro, she earned a bronze medal" "She earned a bronze medal at the former tournament in Budva, Montenegro,"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "but losing to the winner Ding" (you already mentioned that Ding won)
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "with a good performance" "with a strong performance"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Can you name the winners for the Georgian championship?
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Guramishvili had a strong finish to the year at the World Youth Chess Championships," "Guramishvili finished the year with a redeeming performance at the World Youth Chess Championships,"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

2007-09

 * "Guramishvili consolidated her 2006 World Championship gold medal with another excellent year in 2007" "Guramishvili followed up her gold medal-winning year with another impressive run of tournaments in 2007"
 * Changed to "an excellent year" if that was what you were getting at?
 * Duplicate "Georgian" in the first sentence of the second paragraph
 * Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Later in the year in May" "That May"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

2010-13

 * "due to her opponents having a much higher average rating of 2492." "as she had faced opponents with a much higher average rating of 2492."
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Reference [43] does not mention that Guramishvili and Giri eventually married
 * Added. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in November" "that November"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "was only sufficient for joint fourth place" "was only strong enough for joint fourth place"
 * Changed to "only put her in joint fourth place".
 * "an joint first-place finish" "a joint first-place finish"
 * Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Comma after "Femenino Ciudad De Linares"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Comma after "Chennai Open in India"
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

2014-present

 * Pipe "knockout event" to One-game playoff
 * Linked to single-elimination tournament. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:50, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

Playing style

 * Good

Personal life

 * I think that the switching federations part should be in her career section
 * Duplicated. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Delink Anish Giri, already linked above
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

General comments

 * All three pictures are Creative Commons licensed and are relevant to the article
 * No stability issues in the revision history
 * Earwig copyvio score looks fantastic at 2.9%!

Putting on hold now to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. —  Ghost River  14:38, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I made one change myself to eliminate MOS:PUFFERY. Apart from that, it looks good. Passing now. —  Ghost River  01:14, 10 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Thanks for doing the review, ! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)