Talk:Sora ga Suki!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 00:34, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

What can I say - I like bishounen, and I like reading about comics history, so here I am again. Should hopefully not take too long, but ping me if I haven't returned with a review a week from now.--AlexandraIDV 00:34, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * I would expect the sequels to be mentioned in the lead - and speaking of, rewrite Noel! in title case per MOS:ALLCAPS
 * Done.
 * Do we want to mention that Montmartre is part of Paris? Same upon first mention in the plot section.
 * I don't think it's strictly necessary in the lede.

Plot

 * I'll assume good faith on the accuracy, as I haven't read the series.

Development

 * Takemiya selected Paris as the setting for the series; at the time, she had developed an interest in Paris and was collecting film soundtracks of movies set in the city.[5] As Takemiya had never been to Paris, uses the word "Paris" a lot in quick succession - I would at the very least change the last one to "As Takemiya had never been there"
 * Revised.
 * incorporate its customs and culture - I would consider switching these around, so that you can link "its culture" rather than just "culture", avoiding the impression that the link might lead to the article "culture"
 * Done.

Release

 * I guess that this is really more of a question for that article, but I have been wondering: why do we not refer to Sanrūmu Nite as Sunroom Nite? MOS:JAPAN says: For transliterations from katakana, use the English spelling if available (e.g., Thunderbird (サンダーバード, Sandābādo) instead of just Sandābādo)
 * That's a good question, and I wasn't aware of that specific policy. If that's the case, it likely makes sense to move the page to Sunroom Nite.
 * The footnote doubles up on "「quotation marks」" - I really don't think you need both, and would remove the inner Japanese marks.
 * Done.

Collected volumes

 * Seems fine.

Sequels

 * Again, rewrite Noel! in title case.
 * Done.
 * Can we add a translation of "Marude Haru no Yō Ni"?
 * It was already there, looks like it was just hidden by some improper tagging.

Themes and analysis

 * Seems fine.

Reception and influence

 * Seems fine.

Images

 * Not part of the GA criteria, but it would be nice to give descriptive alt text for readers with impaired vision
 * Done
 * Otherwise seems fine

Lovely article! I only had a few minor notes that I would like to see addressed, before I'm ready to promote the article to GA. I will put the review on hold for the customary seven days - please ping me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!--AlexandraIDV 02:43, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 05:39, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for this - I will go ahead and promote the article now!--AlexandraIDV 06:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)