Talk:Sorana bean/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 13:37, 7 October 2019 (UTC)

I'll have a go at this one. Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 13:37, 7 October 2019 (UTC)

Comments
This is a well-written and sensibly-constructed article, and my comments will be few.
 * Thanks for starting review, Chiswick Chap! --valereee (talk) 14:06, 7 October 2019 (UTC)


 * "resulted in cultivation of the Sorana bean nearly ceasing by the 1980s." could be better worded, e.g. "meant that cultivation of the Sorana bean had nearly ceased...".


 * perhaps define (PGI) at first mention, then use it to avoid repeating "Protected Geographical Indication" all over the place.


 * Maybe wikilink European Parliament, Tuscany, microclimate, PGI (first time in body), New York Times, Burgundy, extra-virgin olive oil, herbicide, precipitation.


 * Images all correctly licensed.

Refs

 * Please choose an author format and use it for all refs. You could go "Doe, Joe R." or "Joe R. Doe", for instance. I suggest the former.


 * Ref 7 Lasansky - page(s) needed.


 * Ref 9 Barrett - page(s) needed.


 * Ref 10 Capalbo - page(s) needed.


 * Ref 14 Verreschi - page(s) needed.


 * Ref 2 needs author, date (Lori Zimring de Mori, June 21, 2007).


 * Ref 4 needs "Qualigeo" in publisher (or website) field not in title.


 * Ref 8 needs date (2017).


 * Unclear why Ref 19 needs to say "Bonesprit|" as it's neither the title nor the publisher?


 * Ref 20 needs date (21 April 2019).

Discussion

 * Hey,, thanks for starting review! I'm travelling this week but will be back home next Wednesday, I'll try to start pecking away when I can but I may not be able to get much done until then! --valereee (talk) 10:33, 11 October 2019 (UTC)


 * Hey,, I'm back now! I think I've gotten all of these, except for the Barrett, which I've requested from the library again. The Verreschi ref was to a book that is entirely about the bean but unfortunately is unavailable to me (it was published in 1994 in Italy) so I gave page 1 of that book; the citation was only to support the assertion he'd written such a book. Wish I could access it! --valereee (talk) 10:56, 16 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ref 9 Barrett page? Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:00, 16 October 2019 (UTC)
 * , yes, sorry, I must have edited my comment above between the time you read it and the time you replied! Boy you work fast! All except the barrett, which isn't available online; I've ordered it from my library again. --valereee (talk) 17:57, 16 October 2019 (UTC)
 * -- I got that Barrett page number, it's fixed now! --valereee (talk) 10:48, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

Many thanks. All done, passing now. Good work! Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:26, 23 October 2019 (UTC)