Talk:Sorry Mrs. Carter/GA1

GA Review
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Lead

 * The song was released On August 4, 2014 → It was released on August 4, 2014, through XY (platform, which way?)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * remix of the single → Remove overfluous "the"
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * "Flawless" → add year of release in brackets
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * In the lyrics, Liv portrays herself → The track's lyrical content portrays Liv
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Liv rapped the lyrics → present tense
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The video has earned over two million views less than a week after its release. → The visual has earned...
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The song was listed as one of the top ten → "Sorry Mrs. Carter" was listed in the top ten of
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * for the weeks of August 9, 2014 and August 23, 2014 → for two weeks in 2014 (too detailed for lead section)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:41, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Concept and development

 * the song, promoting it as an → the song as an
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * she explained that she recorded the song → the rapper explained that she recorded the track
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * "Flawless" → add year of release in brackets
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Liv uploaded the song only "a few days" after the release of the "Flawless" remix. → Subsequently, Liv uploaded her song only a few days after the release of the "Flawless" remix.
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Prior to the song's release → Prior to the recording's premiere (word repetition)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Unlink "tabloids" here
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Kendrick Lamar.[8] According to Bustle, "The Invasion" is "[Liv's] quest → Kendrick Lamar, which—according to Bustle—portrays "[Liv's] quest
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Composition and lyrical interpretation

 * forty-four seconds → 44 seconds
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The beat → Its beat
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * single "Ms. Jackson".[13] Tim Surrette of TV Guide noted that the use of the sample was extremely prominent. → single "Ms. Jackson" (YEAR OF RELEASE), whose use ... described as being extremely prominent.
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Liv details her past relationship with rapper Jay Z → wait? Did she really have a relationship with him? I'm a little bit confused because in the lead you say "alleged relationship"
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Throughout the song, she portrays herself → Throughout the song, she is further portrayed
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * toward both artists → towards both artists
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * which includes: "I was → including, "I was
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The lyrics contain → The lyrical content contains (word repetition)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * "I Just Wanna Love U (Give It 2 Me)", and "99 Problems", "Girls, Girls, Girls" → year of release in brackets to all + enlist them correctly with the "and" placed at the end
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * year of release to Beyoncé's songs as well.
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * In the song, Liv denies → In the track, the rapper denies
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * intimacy; she does this by rapping lyrics such as → intimacy by rapping lyrics such as,
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Unlink "chorus" both here and in the audio file description
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * include: "Why → include, "Why
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Beyoncé. It ends with Liv saying "The → Beyoncé, and ends with Live saying, "The
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:42, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * negative responses → singular form
 * It should be plural since it is referring to the responses of multiple critics. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * the side chick. Carter followed → the side chick, with him following
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * the lyrics "You got → the lyrics, "You got
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * viewed the song → viewed the track (alternation)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Bustle's Kaitlin Reilly → Echoing this thought, Bustle's Kaitlin Reilly
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The single was described → The recording was described (alternation)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Beyoncé's fans negatively → The singer's fans also negatively
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * referenced in the song → referenced in the track (alternation)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * however, called the song → Remove "however"
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Place this last para between the second and the third one, please
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:43, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Music video

 * The music video → An accompanying music video for the single
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Link "YouTube" to its respective article on Wikipedia
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * the video was "homemade" with → the visual was homemade, with the rapper
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * a bikini and shawl and drinking wine → a bikini and shawl, and drinking wine (as a new idea starts here in the sentence)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * prominently throughout the video.[14] One of the magazine clippings includes → prominently throughout the video, with one of the including
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The video ends → The clip ends (word rep.)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The video has earned → It has earned
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * viewed the video → viewed the visual (word rep.)
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * It was regraded → It was further regraded
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Kaitlin Reilly. Reilly concluded → Kaitlin Reilly, who concluded
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Release history

 * Use "scope="row" for "Country"
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Unlink formats and label
 * Done. Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Copy-violation

 * 25.95% is ok!
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:46, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Images and others

 * Article is perfectly illustrated by audio sample.
 * Thank you! If you did have the misfortune of actually listening to the audio sample, I'm sorry about that lol. Aoba47 (talk) 23:46, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Links

 * No problems here!
 * Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 23:46, 4 December 2016 (UTC)