Talk:Sorthat Formation/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 19:20, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

will do. Noah Talk 19:20, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I haven't forgotten about this, just ran into some unexpected issues that kept me busy. Noah Talk 11:07, 7 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * on the island on Bornholm, Denmark the second on should be of.
 * Pliensbachian-Late Toarcian age links for these.
 * In fact the Sorthat Formation was included on most of 80s-90s studies as the lowermost part of the Bagå Formation assume it's 1980s and 1990s? That should be specified.
 * Vulcanism assuming this was meant to be volcanism?
 * Prose
 * Why are certain non-proper nouns such as formation and island capitalized? This appears to be a major issue throughout the article.
 * Latter the Bagå Formation was limited This doesn't make sense?
 * Convert metric to US-based units
 * The large Toarcian–Bajocian deltaic systems locally where the shoreline influenced by the vicinity between brackish to freshwater and continental biofacies Missing something?
 * The North German Basin shows that on approximately 14.4 m.a on should be around since it isn't an exact date. I would rather you write out what m.a means since it is only used once and isn't explained elsewhere in the article.
 * What does isp. mean? it should be written in full for the first usage and then abbreviated thereafter.
 * Recommend adding alt text to images.
 * The Bifrons to Levesquei Zone in the coeval units at the east and west of Prignitz a sandy coastal-deltaic succession was replaced by laminated shales with pelagic marine fauna Feels like the sentence is jumbled.
 * what contributed to retrogradational stratal pattern architectures What should be which
 * On the Sorthat Formation is present a transition from upper to lower shoreface environments This is also jumbled.
 * In the Younger Levesquei subzone delta plain Comma after this phrase.
 * Slashes should not be used between two words per MOS:SLASH as it doesn't show how two things are related.
 * analisis misspelling.
 * Later a rise in the sea level is reported due to the increase of Acritarchs and Tasmanites, where a lagoon succession overlain by the fill of a coastal lake that developed into a paleosol verb tense.
 * and the location become again a crevasse delta and fill of an abandoned fluvial channel this is jumbled.
 * suggest he transition to crevasse deltas formed by the amalgamation of crevasse splay deposits and infill of crevasse channels typo and missing some wording.
 * Some sand beds originated probably on the granite horst better as probably originated.
 * Korsodde Section overlies the fine-grained sandstones of the Hasle Formation Add "The" to the beginning.
 * This section of the formation started as a derived of sand units deposited in fluvial channels, with abundant carbonaceous matter was probably derived this looks clanky
 * Is overlaid by the intercalation of crevasse delta deposits and lacustrine-brackish flooding surfaces What is?
 * O several coal seams there were found several Biomolecules ?
 * being most of them found associated to sandy channel fills and on heavily rooted crevasse and lake deposits in shallow inter-fluvial areas Clanky
 * On the Toarcian at Bornholm strata indicates a warm, humid climate Don't think on is appropriate here. There needs to be a comma after climate.
 * that implies the influence of greater transportation energies imply
 * loads of duplicate links.


 * Unfortunately, I am going to be quick failing this nomination due to Grammatical issues as I haven't even scratched the surface. There are numerous occurrences of subject-verb agreement issues, tense issues, misspellings, missing words, etc.. I recommend a thorough copyediting before nominating for GAN again. Excellent work on sourcing though. Noah Talk 23:50, 10 January 2022 (UTC)