Talk:Sortu

"In Ezker abertzalea with for the first time..."
In article with for a mistake. In the first paragraph, it reads,
 * In Ezker abertzalea with for the first time a rejection of ETA's violence.

To a reader without inside knowledge of Basque politics, the first few words of this sentence resembles word salad. Knowing that the term "Ezker abertzalea" essentially means "Basque nationalist leftists" makes the sentence sort of make sense, but it still doesn't read well. What is "in" Ezker abertzalea, and what is Ezker abertzalea "with"? Does the sentence really mean, "The Basque nationalist left rejects ETA's violence for the first time", or is there something missing from the sentence? I hope someone with better understanding of the subject can clean this up. -- FeygeleGoy/פֿײגעלע גױ&lrm; (talk) 18:31, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Good point. How about now? Akerbeltz (talk) 18:55, 12 March 2011 (UTC)