Talk:Soul Sound/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:50, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments I'll put it on hold for a week to see if these issues get resolved. Let me know when you're done. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:33, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "during her trip to" -> "during a trip" (unless you're sure she's only ever made on trip there?)
 * "where she was inspired to compose it based upon her experience there." seems a little weak, maybe "based on her experiences there."
 * "The song was released" -> "It was released...
 * As this is (or should be) written in Brit Eng, demeanor should be demeanour.
 * ""Soul Sound" at Manchester Ampersand and" what is this? And why is Manchester linked?
 * ", having peaked at number" ->", peaking at"
 * "controversially " you mention that twice but don't explain it.
 * " in London, England" no need to link common geographical terms.
 * Picture used in the Reception section seems arbitrary and unrelated.
 * "unsatisfied" or "dissatisfied"?
 * Ref 3 should be The Herald, not Herald Scotland.
 * Sydney Morning Herald should be The Sydney Morning Herald.
 * All ✅.  Jorn  talk 20:16, 13 August 2013 (UTC)