Talk:Soulection

What does the article (or section) do well?

The article provides a great amount of detail while also being concise. The article provides visuals that are helpful to the understanding of the reader. The subheadings that you used make the article easy to follow.

What changes would you suggest overall?

I don't really think there was anything wrong with the article. Since this is a rough draft you will add more to the sections. I would just maybe go into more detail about what types of music they are creating or what is the most popular ones.

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

I would say that for my article I need to use more visuals like the ones used in this article. I think that the visuals help the reader understand the topic more clearly. I think for my article I should use some pictures and tables for statistics to help make the article easier to understand. Radacktyler (talk) 16:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

• What does the article (or section) do well?

I like how you added all the tracks names and talked about each release in the initial sections. I had never heard of this and I feel that after reading what you have so far, I have a good overall understanding of Soulection!

• What changes would you suggest overall?

I like how the founders are different sub sections but I think this could look better if you talk about it under the Founders heading rather than dividing it into different subsections.

• What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Since I am also working on something directly related to the music industry I would recommend that you add maybe more stuff about - Inspiration - Production - Genre - Charts (if any of these are relatable for your article)

• Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! I think the degree of your detail explaining everything about apple music and the radio etc.. You give the reader a good understanding overall! Sanahhathiramani (talk) 16:41, 22 October 2021 (UTC)