Talk:SouthWest Service

edits to discussion of Route 835
This section needs some editing. I propose to clean it up by turning long run-on and compound sentences into shorter sentences. I've already committed minor changes but would like the article to be cleaner. MKoltnow 01:46, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

I've committed some additional edits. Pace 835 does not stop exactly at the train stations, so I recast the sentence which implied that it did. I don't think I changed the content of the discussion regarding the bus public hearings on its elimination, but I think readability is greatly improved. MKoltnow 16:05, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

Now that Route 835 is soon to be a thing of the past, I think it should not receive undue weight and be relegated to a minor mention. MKoltnow 05:47, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

I reduced the 835 reference, since it has been eliminated. MKoltnow 19:20, 9 October 2007 (UTC)